A Poem.

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Good structure.
"The song with with which" <-- one too many with's
"We're born to die,
Not born to live," <-- felt like that was the shift, pretty obvious and puts a good change of mood in the poem,

I liked it overall, but damn AJ let me give you a hug please D:

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Talk to me on Skype more.

I quit cata doe. Got boring.

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