Excuse me, but what exactly you were wanting to "share"? Your UI (User Interface)? Well, it's personal thing.
If you wanted to share experience, then:
1. There is already one good guide on forum and it's pinned.
2. You need to make it more in-depth + detailed.
2.1 And you've already made mistake: do not overwrite "Rend", it last tick also deals dmg and proc "Taste for blood". For maximum efficience you apply new bleed only after previous expired. It's matter of experience.
2.2 BS is not when ready, it's when it's most effective i.e. you OP and queue MS right after it + pop BS, idealy if you do it all under proc of any str/ap increase like trinket, boss mechanics, t10 bonus, shattering throw etc. And you do NOT use BS while heroism is in effect