My First Video Editing Project

Hello Warmane Community,
This is my first time i've edited a video as a marketing project and put it up on youtube. It's about an Ad on Wedding Planners. I would love some suggestions about the editing, content, etc. Please tell me what I can do to improve my editing skills by commenting below on this page. Also since it is a project we are getting graded on the likes and comments on youtube. After watching it please if you like it HIT the LIKE button, Comment something nice (motivational or well done) and Don't forget to share it with others. Comment all suggestions below here so next time I create a video it will have them.
Thankyou

The Link is:
https://youtu.be/waY2zS5D6Rk