Originally Posted by
Zalicka
You got something there sir, but find another music imo, and at 46sec, you should slow the rythm down and face yogg or algalon with one og their line or two and then get back to the epic rythm of video. And feel free to add a line from bronzebeard at the end maybe and there you got a quite good trailer .
Maybe fix what's written too, to feel more epic. "Be the first" "to face the guardians" "and defeat an ancient evil" or something like that (only ideas). But, keep on ! You hold something i think. Quite good intro too!