1. lol its ok am just kidding ^^ u do ur thing guys ( for the drama part )

    and yeh finnaly an honest comment , i was looking for it cuz actualy when i went to the studio to record that song i forgot my sd card which i had the beat on it at home so they gave me one right there and i never heard it before so i planned on redoing it since then
    oh and i forgot thnks for the suport bro :)
    The most honest advice I can provide you is this;

    Don't throw any of this material away. Save it. It works as an example of where you need to progress. Start filtering your autotune better, reduce the ammount of lines that you're using for your lyrics, try to find the proper rythm where you feel comfortable working on. Practice. Practice a lot. You'll be dissapointed with the first year of hard work but you'll start noticing progress after a while.
    Edited: October 28, 2016

  2. Practice. Practice a lot. You'll be dissapointed with the first year of hard work but you'll start noticing progress after a while.
    The best advice that anyone can follow when they're going after a career in ANY field. Specially about not throwing your early work away. You have to make and know the mistakes if you ever wish to improve upon them.

  3. The only honest advice I can provide you is this;

    Don't throw any of this material away. Save it. It works as an example of where you need to progress. Start filtering your autotune better, reduce the ammount of lines that you're using for your lyrics, try to find the proper rythm where you feel comfortable working on. Practice. Practice a lot. You'll be dissapointed with the first year of hard work but you'll start noticing progress after a while.

    well thanks man ( for both of you ) , i dont have material to practice at home but i do alot of freestyles , the studio i record in is for a friend , its not mine :/
    can you tell me what do you think about the flow / rhythme in this one ?? dont mind the meaning i know its in arabic
    neutral people's opinion and advice is very important for me in this rap **** i'll appreciate it


    also this one in french !!

    Edited: October 28, 2016

  4. well thanks man ( for both of you ) , i dont have material to practice at home but i do alot of freestyles , the studio i record in is for a friend , its not mine :/
    can you tell me what do you think about the flow / rhythme in this one ?? dont mind the meaning i know its in arabic
    neutral people's opinion and advice is very important for me in this rap **** i'll appreciate it
    Even though I don't understand a single word of the first video, the vocal rythm sounds better in general and the tempos look way more decent. Can't add much more than that.

    The second link called my attention on the autotune aspect again and I hate to hear that. Makes me cringe and makes me feel uncomfortable while listening to the song. Like I've said; Try to find a BPM that fits you better and where you feel more comfortable working with. It's better to develop slowly than nothing at all.

  5. it's my friend who does the mixing ( the autotun and everything ) i dont know shiit about mixing :( am sad to hear that he actualy suck at it lol but thanks bro i'll talk it up with him or even try to learn my selfe maybe :v i only know how to make beats with fl studio

  6. it's my friend who does the mixing ( the autotun and everything ) i dont know shiit about mixing :( am sad to hear that he actualy suck at it lol but thanks bro i'll talk it up with him or even try to learn my selfe maybe :v i only know how to make beats with fl studio
    Use the software Logic Pro if you can. If you're only able to run Windows, Ableton Live. Those are the best production software's out there.
    Edited: October 28, 2016

  7. Just because they might know me that doesn't necessarily mean that people can't find you ignorant at the end of the day.
    They sure do know quite a few intricate details of your life, such as where and how you spend your money. They sure do sound like a lover jumping to your side.
    Oh so now you're pointing out scholarships since I seem to have shutdown your financial aid comment. Doesn't mean you're guaranteed a job right out of college, just means the financial burden was lifted off you.
    Scholarships are a form of financial aid, you really earned your degree.
    Nice to know I was able to pin point that out. I know a lot of people like yourself who were also engineering majors that didn't make it into the job market straight away. Know what held them back? Lack of experience outside the classroom. You still have to work at more than just grades to get the job. All the degree does is get you the interview. Once you have that, you're competing with everyone else who has the same piece of paper. You better be able to blow them all away with more than just grades and your senior project if you want that nice paycheck.
    Who said I didn't have any of that experience?
    Has any of them shown interest in hiring you and paying you such value? Have you ever got contacted by any of those big industries? I think we both know the most precise and harsh truth for that; NO and you won't get contacted by them because you'll just be another lil'billy that got out of college and thinks he's someone.
    Here you are trying to blast kemii for not reading when you failed to read the exact post you quoted. Great work. Have fun with your miserable life

  8. Use the software Logic Pro if you can. If you can only run Windows, Ableton Live. Those are the best production software's out there.
    alright ; i'll check it out
    anyway thanks alot bro <3 :) have a nice day

  9. They sure do know quite a few intricate details of your life, such as where and how you spend your money. They sure do sound like a lover jumping to your side.
    Are you that salty because no one cares that much about your life? They're all here pointing out your ignorance, you should be glad for having the attention for once in a while. Enjoy while it lasts and stop acting like a teenager making lover jokes.

    Who said I didn't have any of that experience?
    You clearly show that you have no experience, neither maturity when you clearly swim on an ocean of illusions made by yourself. I'm so pumped up to meet you at a ridiculous job and ask you how are the 100,000$ going.

    Here you are trying to blast kemii for not reading when you failed to read the exact post you quoted. Great work. Have fun with your miserable life

    You clearly have an issue on interpretating things as well then. Do you have a job guaranteed? No. Do you have multiple companies after you? No. Do you have any guaranteed future? No. What you have is what you want to believe in and then you call others peoples stable/good life miserable. That confirms the whole point that I've made right from the start and I'll requote myself for the second time since you don't learn;

    This is the part where you're going to point out that you're the special one, right?
    Because you're better than all the other students that are finishing the same degree than you and you're also so special right? News for ya; You're just another number out there and you're equal to everyone else. One year, two years, three years before you, hundreds or thousands of students finished the same degree. You think you're the better cookie of the package? Oh boy, I wish I had the pleasure of being the guy doing your interview for your dream companies/job. Also that supposed e-mail? I'm pretty sure that it's just one of those universities protocols with a few companies to where they send some students for a few weeks. Be someone in your little world, little Special Engineer. I'm pretty sure life will drag your face in the mud.
    Edited: October 28, 2016

  10. i think its hilarious u kids talking **** about mag. u wouldnt say this **** to him at school, hes jacked. not only that but he takes the hardest classes, writes the dankest memes, and hangs out with the hottest ladies. yall are pathetic lol

  11. You don't need to repeat anything. We all know how much of a hyprocritical person you can be after reading this;

    The difference is that we know how to read. Thing that you've failed to do on your previous post. Don't try to throw stones at people and not expect answers that you might not enjoy.
    Appears reading isnt your strong point either...

    Point is, there are many aspects of Legion I do not like, having mentioned only a few above
    ________

    You clearly have an issue on interpretating things as well then.
    says the guy who thinks hes smart quoting me on something and after having been told the same thing already?
    dafaq.jpg

  12. i think its hilarious u kids talking **** about mag. u wouldnt say this **** to him at school, hes jacked. not only that but he takes the hardest classes, writes the dankest memes, and hangs out with the hottest ladies. yall are pathetic lol
    I have no idea of what you're talking about since I've never said such things. I just don't like when people blind themselves with their own ignorance. So get off my back.

    says the guy who thinks hes smart quoting me on something and after having been told the same thing already?
    dafaq.jpg
    Careful with the words you use because you might end up regreting them. This is clearly the case so don't pull an innocent card on me when you've been a sick hypocrite. At least admit that you were wrong instead of writing a drama piece to justify your lack of personality. No one cares about what your boyfriend did, no one cares what he thinks or does. Just admit your mistakes for once.
    Edited: October 28, 2016

  13. WHAT THE ACTUAL **** IS THIS ...?

    Lul

  14. WHAT THE ACTUAL **** IS THIS ...?

    Lul
    Just sit back, relax and enjoy reading :D

  15. Here you're going out of your way to point out someone's posts, digging through entire threads specifically to find those said posts. Do you not have a life or something? Wonder who's more worthy of pity, him for displaying emotion or you, the hateful autist? Actually there's nothing to wonder about.

    And I'm getting drunk on cider again. I should stop doing that but **** it. Unbanned here would do good if he's just chill for a bit and get drunk for once, if only to forget about his miserable life outside of the internet, where he can't be a big guy anymore.
    Like Mercy said, it's real easy to look at someone's post history, but I do understand it's a minefield for people that have the brain capacity of a 3 year old.

    You're concerned about me not being "chill" and not drinking to forget my "miserable life", while you're doing EXACTLY that, begging for attention.

    It's taking your own life you should focus on and not how I live mine, just because I don't cry on a forum about my problems like the vast majority here doesn't mean I don't have one, it's private for a reason.

    Your attempts to get under my skin reek of desperation. Man, if you're going to follow me around on every post I make these days, at least make it worthwhile.

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